Nowadays, there are schools just for women and some just for boys. Also there are others in which men and women can study together. Most of these schools are private schools. Now women can study the same degrees that men study. But some specialists claim that the way a woman learns is different from the one that a man does. So should there still be schools just for men and some just for women?
The ones that agree with the idea that should still be schools just for boys and some just for girls, point out that in women`s nature, there are some things that just women should learn. They say that cooking and manual activities are just for women. But it has been proven that these activities can be performed by both genders. It can be true that in women´s nature, there are some things that they could do better or worse than men. But also it is true that they can learn and do the same activities that men do.
The experts on the matter say that when men and women study all together, they can develop social skills. Women or men who are very shy can interact with the other gender and as the time pass by, they can be more talkative people. Also when both genders do team work at school, they can turn more tolerable with the others, since it is a way of listening to the feelings of the others. It is good for both, men and women, to work all together.
The relationships between men and women are very important. To experiment a sentimental relationship at an early age with someone from the other gender is good. But, if men and women are separated in different schools, how could they gain experience in relationships? So this is a good reason why women and men should study together. By having a boyfriend or girlfriend at school, when these young become adults, they can have more satisfactory and lasting relationships.
Having said these, I think that it is better that only exist schools in which men and women are mixed. It has been said that, if both genders are together, they can develop social skills, also the fact that women can not do some things that men do is false. They can do and learn the same things man does, so that is not a reason to maintain schools just for girls. And finally they should study together because of the sentimental relationships. If they get along in that stage, they can have better relationships in the future. So it is time to say goodbye to the old schools just for one gender and say welcome to a mixed education.
Reference
http://www.independent.co.uk/news/education/education-news/should-girls-and-boys-be-taught-differently-650611.html
I think that the topic was very interesting, and you made it a little bit more interesting with all the arguments you provided in your essay, and also your conclusion is like the summary of all you have said, which is very interesnting.
ResponderEliminarThe only "mistake" that I could see is that you could write "The ones WHO agree" instead of "The ones that agree", I think that this phrase sounds better with the word who, anyway, that is a good essay.